Inscription On Card From Colleagues What Do You Think Of This?

What do you think of this? - inscription on card from colleagues

I wrote a little story, and would appreciate your comments. :)

She sat down, confused and disoriented. A lot of cards and bouquets of flowers around, sent by strangers. Her blue eyes adapted to the sea to the midday sun, looking out the window. A map in some way Indigo was in the abyss of the other. It was just a piece of paper folded in two small construction. "A stranger sure," read the inscription on the front. He unfolded it and skimmed the rest of the words were written in black. "What have immortalized you. How do you know who was the sender." Damn, "he muttered. He does not have, because he was always there.

16 comments:

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

zahunta said...

This story is very well written, but another word other then blue (just my opinion)

That's good enough for me (which made me want more with the first sentence: read))

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